Apple Blossoms by Susan Kelly-DeWitt

One evening in winter
when nothing has been enough,
when the days are too short,

the nights too long
and cheerless, the secret
and docile buds of the apple

blossoms begin their quick
ascent to light. Night
after interminable night

the sugars pucker and swell
into green slips, green
silks. And just as you find

yourself at the end
of winter’s long, cold
rope, the blossoms open

like pink thimbles
and that black dollop 
of shine called

bumblebee stumbles in.

Apple Blossoms

I know, technically this is the first day of spring, and though the sun peeks out periodically, the temperature still has the chill of winter in it. So even if I am premature, I go looking for poems celebrating the arrival of spring and find this gem. One evening in winter / when nothing has been enough – sometimes in late winter, this is how it feels, cheerless as she tells us. And yet, one of those evenings, the secret / and docile buds of the apple // blossoms begin their quick / ascent to the light. What a gorgeous image of these unseen buds as they rise inexorably toward the sun’s light.

During these seemingly endless nights, the sugars pucker and swell / into green slips, green / silks. Can’t you just picture these viridescent jewels unfolding? She captures that sense of weariness, of wanting the season to change, of being at the end / of winter’s long, cold /rope. But just then, she rewards us with the promise that the blossoms will open like pink thimbles, tiny delicate flowering cups. And as if that were not enough, that black dollop / of shine called / bumblebee stumbles in. Sigh of contentment. Can’t you just imagine this, even if it’s not happening yet where you are – but it will, a poet told me so.

22 thoughts on “Apple Blossoms by Susan Kelly-DeWitt

  1. Love this poem! The images, the feelings – that wonderful line “winter’s long, cold / rope”. And your apt comment, “Can’t you just imagine this, even if it’s not happening yet where you are – but it will, a poet told me so.” Yes, a sigh of contentment indeed. Thanks, Jan!

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  2. I love the imagery in her poem. I’ve been seeing the buds on the trees in my back yard starting to increase in size. I was quite amazed when I discovered that the buds are created in the fall – all ready to burst open once the weather is suitable.

    Thank you for this poem. Margaret 613-725-6941 h 613-795-9879 c

    Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.

    Oscar Wilde.

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  3. A beautiful promise in the long nights of winter that blossoms will open again as they always do in spring. The leaves are changing colour here in Argentina. Fall is in the air.

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  4. Such a beautiful poem, the words so rich and evocative. For the first time this summer, Fall is in the air in Argentina. Time to come home.

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